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Ideas/Development |
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| Score from the bottom up. Each substage assumes proficiency of skills for the preceding substage. |
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Evidence of Controlling Idea and Development |
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P4 |
.3 | Main idea controls/shapes the development of the purpose, The student begins to focus the topic and the purpose through use of selective details. There is some elaboration (depth of detail ) of the content with illustrative examples. |
| .2 | Main idea controls/shapes the development of the purpose, with supporting details. | |
| .1 | Main idea begins to control/shape development of purpose with limited details on the topic, (no longer a list). | |
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Thought Units with or without Pictures |
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P3 |
.4 | Related ideas support topic, details are listed or sequenced. |
| .3 | More than one thought unit. Ideas usually on topic with a few unrelated ideas. | |
| .2 | One or more thought units (phrases, sentences). Ideas are simple, scattered, or repeated. | |
| .1 | Idea(s) expressed in simple sentences or phrases. | |
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Writing as Labeling Pictures |
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P2 |
.3 | Simple sentence or phrase attached to a picture as labeling (i.e. i lk mi dg = I like my dog or ths is mi dg = This is my dog). |
| .2 | One or more thought units attached to picture as labeling (i.e. mi dg = my dog). | |
| .1 | Word(s) attached to picture as labeling (i.e. dg = dog). | |
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Writing, if Present, Random |
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P1 |
.6 | Random word(s) no apparent tie to pictures. |
| .5 | Recognizable letter(s). | |
| .4 | More than one idea and/or details expressed in picture. | |
| .3 | Recognizable simple picture. | |
| .2 | Recognizable shape(s). | |
| .1 | Scribble writing or unrecognizable picture. | |